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aqua the hedgie, July 12th, 2013, 3:24 pm ( Reply )

- I think it's bigger on the inside.

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@Wolfry: THERE IS NO FOURTH WALL!

posted by aqua the hedgie on August 9th, 2013, 1:59 pm





 
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@aqua the hedgie

Sounds like my kind of place.

posted by G.B.A on August 9th, 2013, 2:08 pm





 
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It's bigger on the inside, I swear!

IN OTHER NEWS THESE UPDATES ARE NOT HOLDING ME OVER

posted by Punchy on August 9th, 2013, 2:37 pm





 
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@G.B.A: Excellent. Come on over, we just might actually have tea for once.

@Punchy: Define please. ._.

posted by aqua the hedgie on August 9th, 2013, 8:24 pm





 
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@aqua the hedgie: As in bigger on the inside or my feelings about your updates?

If you're regarding bigger on the inside, we both know what I'm referring to.

About my feelings on these updates: They're, for lack of a better word, boring. You shouldn't have one update every week with six panels of Nivlac talking to himself, while virtually nothing is happening. I mean, I'm aware he's "constructing the world" but that's it. Barely any plot, action, or adventure happening.

I'm aware it's the prologue, and you have it set weekly so you can get a bunch of comics done, but to me it feels like you're dragging this on, when it could easily be finished quickly with more than one update.

I don't know how to explain it, and as you probably know, I'm not good at explaining things. Let's just say this, and keep in mind that I'm speaking my mind, and not trying to offend you. The only reason I have this in my faves is because I consider us friends and I really want to see Punchy vs. Aqua. If those two were not the case, this comic would not be in my favorites because all it is so far is a five comic monologue.

I apologize if this offends you, most likely I'll look back at this at a future point and be ashamed of my poor wording. But this is basically how I'm feeling right now.

posted by Punchy on August 9th, 2013, 9:00 pm





 
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@Punchy: Oh trust me, this is of no offense to me.

Luckily, the next comic actually takes a break from Nivlac temporarily. It probably won't be quite super actiony or anything, but it's true.

posted by aqua the hedgie on August 9th, 2013, 9:04 pm





 
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@aqua the hedgie: OK

Also I created a tl;dr version of that comment:

"More needs to happen if you only plan on once a week updates."

posted by Punchy on August 9th, 2013, 9:06 pm



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Its like the TARDIS!

posted by Guest on August 10th, 2013, 9:05 am



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@Guest: Nivvy's got one heck of a chameleon circuit.

posted by Aqua "At a motel" Hedgie (Guest) on August 11th, 2013, 12:05 am





 
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NIVLAAAAAAAAC!
I'MA JUDGIN' YOU!
Also, I agree with almost everything Punchy said.

posted by Cascade on August 11th, 2013, 6:27 pm





 
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@Cascade: I can see why. I actually also agree but I'm bad at beginnings so yeah.

posted by aqua the hedgie on August 11th, 2013, 6:44 pm



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